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Hi, I am mostly writing in the ST forum, But I wanted to try participate in this event.
I am not really into writing stories (I like imagining different things more, than writing in a form of a storyā¦), but I tried it anyway, Itās a story about the skill trainer Angela (Since she would probably fit the mood of a storyā¦)ā¦
*My naming is a little strange so donāt mind itā¦Thought the story itself is also a little strangeā¦
Part one:
A long time ago there was a small village by the name of Innelloa.
There lived two twins: A teenager boy by the name of Angelo and a teenager girl by the name of Angela.
Since the twinās parents died from the hands of ogres, Angelo has trained to become a warrior, so he can join the Silverwing Order, to guard towns from the repeated attacks of ogres. Angela wanted to help her brother but she was not good with a cold weapon, so she learned magic from a few magic books that she found in her parentsā old room. Things went good for both of them, until one day, she unthinkingly opened the ābox of Pandoraāā¦
One sunny day in the forest of Innelloa:
āThere is a lot more of them then we thought!ā, said a voice, āWe canāt let them go to the city!!!ā.
āI will freeze them with my ice magicā¦!ā, said another voice, āSo, we would have more time to defeat them!ā. Suddenly a mini army of ogres run right from a brush right in over to the Innelloa village. After a second, words of magic were heard, Then ice flow right on the ogresā feet, while freezing them in place. From the brushes run two twins: a teenaged boy and a teenaged girl.
āYour magic is quite helpful, sister!ā, said Angelo.
āI tried my best to learn it!ā, said Angela while looking on the freezed in place ogres, āThought, I wonder how long the spell would lastā¦ā.
āI would have to use some fast Aoe skills while you would use yoursā¦ā, Said Angelo, āI suppose we could finish them of before your spell waversā¦ā, he ended.
After that both of them used the most powerful aoes that they knew and so the ogres were finished of before they could even move one leg.
The twins were tired from using too much mana, so they walked home slowly. Suddenly Angela felt strange and stopped.
āWhat is wrong, sister?ā, asked Angelo.
āItās nothingā¦I just felt a strange aura around hereā¦ā, said Angela, āItās probably just my imaginationā¦ā, she stood for a few seconds, āYou can go ahead of me, I will be going right after youā¦ā, Then Angelo went ahead.
āWhy do I suddenly have this strange feelingā¦???ā, wondered Angela while sighting. Suddenly a dark figure appeared out of nowhere carrying a dark book in itās hands. The figure was surrounded by a strange dark aura. The dark figure went past Angela and mysteriously disappeared, dropping the book right on the road. Angela stood there surprised, not understanding what happened. āWho was that dark figureā¦.???ā, wondered Angela, āWas that even a humanā¦.???ā, she wondered more, āAnd this strange bookā¦.ā, she lifted the book from the ground and looked on it. It was a dark book, it also felt magical to Angela, but the book was also sealed. āThis must be a book of magic!ā, thought Angela, āIt could have a lot of great spells for me to learnā¦!ā, she continued, āI could learn them and help my brotherā¦ā, she ended. Then without thinking twice she tried to open the book, to her surprise the seal disappeared right away.
āSister, are you comingā¦???ā, asked Angelo while going towards her as she opened the book.
Suddenly a strange magic circle appeared under her feet, and a strange spell was cast. The sky became full with dark clouds, the sun disappeared, and the circle itself became a barrier, and outside of it hurled fire and lighting. It was so big that for a minute nothing can be saw. But as it ended, Angela understood that she made a big mistake, a mistake she will forever regret. Everything around her was destroyed, everything was in ruins, and near her was ash. āBrotherā¦ā¦!ā, she said in sorrow. Then she saw that itās not all she did, strange dark auras appeared in different places and materialized into monsters, many of them and of different types. She thought that if she opens the book again, they would be absorbed inside of it, but the book completely disappeared. Then the monsters came right at her, to attack her. She fought them with her spells, but they hadnāt worked much on them. So, before long she was surrounded, without a way to escape. She thought that itās the end, that she would die there without a chance to redeem herself. Suddenly, there was a white light, and it materialized into a white-silver necklace in a shape of angel wings. āWhat is this?ā, wondered Angela as she touched them. Suddenly the wings were magically putted on her, and as they did, she found a new power in herself. To this moment, she used the power of the elements, from now on she could also use the powers of light and darkness. She attacked the monsters with a light spell, and to her surprise, it was āsuper effectiveā.
After a few minutes, all the monsters that surrounded her were dead. She wondered why she can use both elemental spells and light/darkness spells. āThat is for you are a being of half human and half elfā¦ā, echoed a voice in her head. She was surprised at first, but after thinking more about it, she understood that she shouldnāt be surprised anymore. If there are questions she want answered, she would search for the answer herself, and with that she began her journey.
Part 2:
Somewhere in the woods:
āāSearch for the book of Dailleā, they saidā¦ā, said a voice, āāItās sealedā they saidā¦ā, the voice continued, āāThe creatures of darkness are trapped inside of itā, they saidā¦ā, it continued annoyingly, āāYou just need to get back the book, and your mission will be completedā they saidā¦ā, The voice began to rage, āIf itās like that, Why the **** am I attacked by an army of undead!!!!!!ā, suddenly a few undead monsters got pushed back by fire. Then a teenage girl came running. She had black hair and red eyes, and was dressed in black robes. She also had a strange red emblem in the place where the heart is.
āOnce this mission is completed, I will kill those geezers from the Arcane council with my own two handsā¦!!!!ā, she yelled while attacking the monsters with spells. As she run, she saw Angela walking right before her.
āA member of the Silverwing orderā¦.???ā, she wondered, āOr a fellow Arcane cousin memberā¦???ā, she continued, then she snapped, āNever mind that! I still need help hereā¦ā, she continued, āHey you! Care to give a helping handā¦???!ā, she yelled to Angela.
āOkā¦.ā, said Angela in surprise.
After a few minutes, surrounded by monstersā corpsesā¦
āYou are not badā¦ā, said the black robed teenage girl, āSo, what faction are you from?ā, she asked.
āFactionā¦???ā, wondered Angela, āI am not in a factionā¦ā, she ended.
āThatās goodā¦ā, said the black robed teenage girl, āThe dudes from Silverwing order are really annoyingā¦ā, she continued, āI am called Flaimma!ā, she continued, āSome say, that itās because of my character...ā, she said angrily, āThey say that I am like a burning fireā¦!!!ā.
āI am Angelaā¦ā, said Angela.
āThat is a name of a āgood girlāā¦ā, annoyingly said Flaimma, then she suddenly felt weak, āIt seems like an injury from fighting those monstersā¦ā, she continued. Then Angela used a healing spell on her.
āYou can use elemental spells and healā¦???ā, wondered Flaimma then she looked on the necklace around Angelaās neck, she was quiet for a few seconds, after that she became mad, āSo, you are the one that opened the book!!!ā, she yelled, āMy sufferings are because of you!!!ā. Angela shook her head and silently in a guilty voice, said sorry. Flaimma was surprised.
āNo one said āsorryā to me beforeā¦.ā, said Flaimma, āBesides, You must join the Arcane council nowā¦ā, she continued, Angela was confused, āSilverwing order only accepts the āinnocentsā and the āheroes of justiceā in their faction, one mistake and you became an enemyā¦ā, she ended. āThought, there are also people there that donāt regard us as an enemy, I know one person who is like thatā¦ā, she added, āI suppose I can meet with her on my way to my factionā¦ā, she added, āAnd you are coming with me!!!ā, she said while pointing with a finger on Angela.
āWhyā¦???ā, wondered Angela. Flaimma became mad.
āFirst, you need to explain to my superiors what you did!ā, said Flaimma, āSecond, since you are the one who is responsible for all this mess, you should accompany me!ā, she continued, āThird, If I say you will travel with me, then you will travel with me!!!ā, she continued, āGot it nowā¦???ā, she asked with a smile.
āYesā¦ā, said Angela while looking on Flaimma with a āSheās really strangeā face expression.
Part 3:
Somewhere on a valley near a beautiful river:
āSisterā¦???ā, wondered a teenage boy that was wearing a warrior clothes, āWhere had she gone againā¦?ā, he said with a sigh and went to search for his sister.
Somewhere inside the forest:
āWhat!!!ā, yelled Flaimma, āDarkness itself gave you that book???!!!ā.
āThat was darknessā¦???ā, wondered Angela.
āAccording to what you told me, yesā¦ā, said Flaimma, āBut itās actions are really strange, it could have opened the book by itselfā¦!ā, she ended in a surprised voice.
After a while of walking(near 3 hoursā¦)ā¦
āItās strangeā¦ā, said Flaimma, āWe should have exited the forest alreadyā¦ā, she continued, āDid it somehow turn into a magical forest?ā, she suddenly paused, āI think I did it againā¦ā,she ended while standing in place.
āWhatā¦?ā, wondered Angela while standing near Flaimma, āYou donāt meanā¦?ā, she started asking.
āI got a bad sense of directionā¦ā, Said Flaimma, āI got lost againā¦ā, she continued. Then she saw that the trees became nearer to them even thought they hadnāt moved for a few seconds, āWe have companyā¦!ā, she said while summoning an inferno, then she become annoyed, āEven the trees were turned to monsters!ā, then she attacked a tree with magic. After that Flaimma and Angela fought the monster trees together. But, no matter how hard they fought those monsters, they seemed to increase more and more.
āIt was my last mana potion!!!ā, yelled Flaimma, āWhy are they only keep coming???!!!ā, she yelled.
āI also used all of the potions that I made from plantsā¦ā, said Angela while attacking a monster before her, āAnd, the tonics tooā¦ā, she continued while attacking a monster in the left of her. Each passing second the monster trees surrounded the party more and more.
āThis is annoying!!!ā, said Flaimma as she punched and kicked the monsters (since she didnāt had any mana left). Suddenly a few monsters were attacked by something and fall on the ground making a passage of monster corpses. Someone stood right before it. The figure looked like a bear.
āYou became dull, Flaimma!ā, said a voice. Then the figure walked to Flaimma and Angela (while looking like a human).
āWhat are you doing here, Girrvve???!!!ā, Wondered Flaimma.
āThatās not something you should be saying to someone who just saved your lifeā¦ā, said Girrvve. He had brown hair and orange eyes, and was dressing in archer clothes while holding a bow. He also had a strange red emblem hanging from his bow. Flaimma got annoyed.
āYou hadnāt saved our life, you just surprised those monsters!ā, said Flaimma. Girrvve smiled and took something from his robes. It was three teleportation scrolls.
āHereā¦One for each of usā¦ā, he annoyingly said while giving one scroll to Angela and one to Flaimma, āRemember to give me something for itā¦ā, he continued, after that, holding the scroll in his hand, and by saying āTeleportationā teleported somewhere.
āHe hadnāt changed at all!ā, said Flaimma, āThe same smart-a** he was before!!!ā, then she also teleported. Angela teleported after them.
To everyoneās surprise they were still inside the forest.
āWhat teleporting scrolls were they?ā, asked Flaimma.
āRandom portal scrollsā¦ā, answered Girrvve, āI thought they would workā¦ā, he sincerely said.
āI wonder what is worseā, Thought Angela, āFlaimmaās sence of direction or Girrvveās ideasā¦ā.
āWhat are we going to do now?ā, wondered Angela.
āDo not worry, For I, a messenger of love and justice, had come to your aid!ā, suddenly said a voice.
āIt sounds like your friendā¦ā, said Girrvve to Flaimma, then both of them sighed.
āI know itās you, Lienna!ā, started Flaimma, āCome out here!!!ā, she yelled. After that there was a sigh, and a figure jumped right from a tree(Yes, sheās like Amelia from Slayers in a wayā¦lolā¦). It was a teenager girl with blonde hair and blue eyes, wearing white robes, and a strange blue emblem right where the heart is.
āFlaimma, you ruined my entry speechā¦ā,said Lienna in a sad voice.
āSister!!!ā, suddenly yelled a voice. Flaimma sighed.
āHe is also hereā¦ā, Flaimma said in an annoyed voice as the figure drew nearer. It was a teenager boy with blonde hair and blue eyes, wearing warrior clothes, with a strange blue emblem hanging from his sword.
āYou!!!ā, he yelled while putting a finger on Flaimma, āWhat a creature of evil such as yourself doing to my sister???!ā, he asked(kind of), āGet away or by my sword I shall judge you!ā, he proudly said. Flaimma got annoyed.
āWhat did you just said???!!!ā, She yelled.
Part 4:
Inside of a living room, in a big houseā¦
āYou made such a messā¦ā, Said Lienna to Flaimma. Flaimma got annoyed.
āIt wasnāt me who made this mess!!!ā, she yelled, āI am in fact, the victim hereā¦ā, she continued in a sad voice. Girrvve laughed. Flaimma looked at him in annoyance.
āHello miss, My name is Lionneā, suddenly said Liennaās brother, āThe whole journey must have been really hard on youā¦ā, he sadly said, āEspecially traveling with that creature of darkness and destructionā¦ā, he said in a more sad voice. Flaimma became annoyed(like always).
āWhat did you just said???!!!ā, Flaimma yelled at him.
āBut itās not too far from the truth, Flaimmaā¦ā, said Lienna, āBack when we were together in the Silverwing order, you would occasionally make troubleā¦ā, she continued, āLike that time when you played with potions and turned everyone to flies, and that other time when you used a magic mirror and nearly burned the whole magic schoolā¦ā.
āReallyā¦???ā, wondered Angela.
āNow I get it...ā, said Girrvve, āThatās why you joined the Arcane council right in the middle of a missionā¦ā, he continued, āYou always make such a messā¦ā.
āMy poor sisterā¦ā, said Lionne while crying, āShe got into a very dangerous situations because of that cruel creatureā¦ā. Flaimma got annoyed and mad.
After a few weeks(since the story is already longer that I planned it to beā¦āsighāā¦)ā¦
The party of Angela, Flaimma, Girrvve, Lienna and Lionne stood right before a long bridge that went to a dark flying castle surrounded by dragons. The sky around the heroes(kind of) was grey, while the sun was red. The party began crossing the bridge, while hoping to be undetected by dragons.
āWhat are we here for, again?ā, Asked Flaimma.
āWell, we got back to the Arcane council, they were surprised that we were with a half-human half-elf and two members of the Silverwing orderā¦ā, started Lienna, āThen a strange dark figure appeared, we confirmed that it was darknessā¦the council began to blame Flaimma, she became madā¦ā, she continued, āDarkness attacked, somehow we survived even thought everything else was destroyedā¦ā, the she cried, āPoor innocents, to die like thatā¦ā.
āAnd then, we went on a quest to avenge them!!!ā, said Lionne.
āActually, few of them survived, and asked to destroy darknessā¦ā, said Girrvve, āThey added that if we donāt, it will swallow the whole world, only leaving death and destructionā¦ā, he continued, āThey promised to award us if we succedā¦ā, then he looked at Flaimma, āThere were those that suddenly became very determinate to goā¦ā. Flaimma got annoyed.
After a while, inside of the castle, in the throne roomā¦
āSo, you finally came, mortals!ā, suddenly said a voice.
āDarkness!!!ā, the party said in one voice.
āYou are a very strange partyā¦ā, said the voice, āStrange indeedā¦ā.
āWhat are you driving at???!!!ā, annoyingly asked Flaimma.
āYour party has a half-human half-elf who uses both mage and healer skills that is still uncertain by what she needs to doā¦A mage from the arcane order that has a really hot and neurotic personalityā¦An archer, from the same faction that likes to be known as a āknow allāā¦A healer from the Silverwing order that fights āFor love and justiceāā¦Her brother, a warrior from the same faction, that dreams to drive every monster from the worldā¦ā, it smiled a little, āYou are really a very strange combinationā¦ā, it paused for 3 seconds, āAnd probably, the best combination of allā¦ā. The party was a little surprised.
āStop blubbering things I donāt understand!!!ā, Yelled Flaimma.
āWhatā¦???ā, wondered Angela.
āYeyā¦We are a combination!ā, said Lienna.
āI will surely destroy youā¦ā, said Lionne.
āInterestingā¦ā, said Girrve.
āYou donāt have to think much about itā¦ā, said darkness, āFor I will kill you before you would be able to understand your power!!!ā, then darkness attacked the party with a huge ball of darkness.
āYou all are parts of something biggerā¦ā, said another voice. Then a barrier of light appeared before the party, negating the attack. Then the party saw that it wasnāt really a barrier, those were souls of the dead.
āBrother!!!ā, said Angela as she saw her brother along with them.
āYou!!!ā, yelled darkness.
āYes, itās meā¦ā, said a voice. Suddenly a figure with light aura appeared near darkness, āLight, the other part of youā¦ā. The party was even more confused.
āHow did you come out???!ā, wondered darkness, āI was in charge!!!ā.
āWere you reallyā¦???ā, said light, āWe both were in charge, just your hold was strongerā¦ā, it continued, āNow, our hold is the sameā¦ā.
āWhat is going on hereā¦???ā, wondered Angela.
āYou know about Yin-Yang, donāt youā¦???ā, asked light, āJust like that symbol states, Light and Darkness are always together everywhere, anytimeā¦ā, it continued, āOne lives together with the other and one also dies together with the otherā¦ā, it continued while looking on darkness, then it looked on Angela, āIt was me who dropped the book back then, the moment darkness got distractedā¦ā.
āIt was your voiceā¦???ā, wondered Angela.
āCertainlyā¦ā, said light.
āYou are boringā¦.ā, said darkness, āAnd your whole talk is boringā¦ā.
āAnd destroying everything is funny to you?ā, asked light.
āDestroying, killing, hatingā¦ā, said darkness, āThose are really interestingā¦ā.
āYou creature of evil!ā, yelled Lionne. Darkness attacked Lionne with a ball of darkness. Lionne got pushed back.
āYou are annoying, so just lye thereā¦ā, darkness said. Then suddenly, itās dark aura grew. It became bigger and bigger every passing second.
āAngela, Use the necklace and fuse the two of us together, in the way we should beā¦ā, said light as she saw that darkness becomes bigger, āBefore darkness becomes big enough to absorb the worldā¦!ā, she ended (And, yes, it somehow turned into a black holeā¦).
āWait, you said that all five of us are parts of something biggerā¦ā, wondered Angela.
āAnd, that necklace can fuse darkness and light togetherā¦ā,said Lienna.
āIf darkness is bigger that light, does it means that light will disappear if it gets fused with darknessā¦?ā, wondered Flaimma.
āIt seems that we have to fuse together, and somehow make darkness smallerā¦ā, said Girrvve.
āAll of us fusedā¦.ā, Said Lionne in a scared voice while standing on his feet, āTogether with the self destructing dark creatureā¦?ā, he continued. Flaimma looked at him annoyingly, āOk, if it will save the worldā¦ā.
āBut the one who uses the necklace would be sended to the futureā¦ā, said light.
The members of the party looked at each other, and made a choice: the world must be saved, even if the five of them wonāt be together anymore. So, Angela used the necklace, the party shone in a white light and materialized into a figure of light.
āWe are the five starts of destiny!ā, started Lionne, āChoossen by the gods to destroy evil!!!ā.
āIn the name of love and justiceā¦ā, said Lienne.
āYou are annoying!!!ā, said Flaimma.
āThey are so strangeā¦ā, said Girrvve.
āArenāt all of us a little strangeā¦???ā, wondered Angela.
After that the party attack darkness, made it smaller, then ādefusedā, and Angela became to fuse light and darkness together. As she completed the fusion the necklace disappeared and she was teleported to the future, 300 years after the time in which she meet everyone.
Angela was sad at first, but then she understood that everyone has something to do, her friends, that remained in the past are doing their best in fighting monsters(While doing to their best to not argue, make problems by mistake and not act sillyā¦).
After that Angela decided to leave the fighting with monsters to the young generation, while she would be helping them in that. She opened a bookstore where she sold skill books that she made from her own magic, so that every inexperienced adventurer would be prepared for the long journey, be it a member of the Arcane council or the Silverwing order.
The end
*I thought that players would write short stories, so I thought about writing a two part short storyā¦It somehow became a four part short story thoughtā¦
*I could have written a little more, but the story is strange enough already(It just somehow turned out this wayā¦)+ If the story would actually get choosen (With āIfā as the main word), I would only get a package, nothing moreā¦
*Thought, it seems that everyone who didnāt cheat gets a codeā¦
*To everyone who is wondering, I wrote it in microsoft word document first(Thought,it took time...), and then pasted it here...After I finally ended the story somehow...
thank you so much for sharing us with such a splendid story.
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